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Love You - My Savior

Lord I just want to write a poem for you because I love you so much You have been with me through so many things So many things that go on you have helped me pushed through like a glorious soldier You have been so patient So many times I was mad at you calling you names - names that you don't deserve But you never get mad You carefully craft out ways to give it to me You let me see things the way you see it So patiently so majestically you guide me You could have said "I am through with you" but you didn't You could have run and say "I'd never see you again" but you stay the course Why are You like that? Don't you know that I hated you? Don't you know that I did not care? Why You care? Anyway, your work does wonder I still am the headstrong person I still am the unconvincing head But You got me I love you in spite of myself I love you no matter what you did So don't do bad things, okay? I love you running up and down inside and upside Wild and restrained Up and down I love you Lord

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Date: 12/12/2014 1:09:00 PM
I think most have been in your shoes.... Glad to see you..hugs Tim
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/12/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thanks, Tim! Glad to hear that lol. Ahh so now we know what Tim looks like :)
Date: 12/12/2014 4:59:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Toquyen! Praise be the Lord! I really enjoyed your poem about Him dear friend. Have a wonderful weekend! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/12/2014 9:23:00 AM
Thanks, Dorian. We all love Him :)
Date: 12/12/2014 12:32:00 AM
Wow Toquyen, this is such a great testimony of the love God has for us. Its beautifully done straight from the heart. Blessings Carl
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/12/2014 1:06:00 AM
Thanks, Carl. Yes. Love ya

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