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Love Tale of Everest - Mountains

The elegant lady dressed in blue, Often changes her gown to orange hue, In mornings she wears a golden glow, At nights a diamond as white as snow, What a beauty! May I know your name, I am the alluring sky of all time fame, I fell in love in the very first sight, I wondered whether it is wrong or right, Whatever comes she is my wife, For the muscular Mt Everest’s future life, With fairness cream on my face, I proposed her with alpine grace, She looked at me with lovely eyes, Wow! I melted down like frozen ice, With immense joy I need a kiss, Height was just 8848, I found it miss, I tried to jump but my mother’s hold, Never let me touch her sweet lips fold, Is this our fate! Her iris in tears, That swept my face and flowed as perennial rivers. July 13, 2016. Mountains - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 7/13/2016 7:12:00 PM
Nice Piece Madhuprya. Congrats
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:21:00 AM
Thanks anisha..I enjoyed your ant dove story;)
Date: 7/13/2016 2:13:00 PM
Such lovely imagery and feelings presented, Madhupriya, in your mountain poem. Best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thank you sandra;)
Date: 7/13/2016 6:04:00 AM
Such a beautiful imagery, Madhupriya:) Enjoyed reading this one:)
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/13/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for enjoying JD:)
Date: 7/13/2016 5:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. All the best for the contest.
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/13/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks for your wishes Ravi:)

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