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Love Or Lust- a Blitz

a great mystery a tale of love love is life love is sweet sweet fantasy sweet kiss kiss of death kiss of fire fire warm fire is great great dream great expectations expectations disappoint expectations too high high in the sky high price to pay pay your dues pay back back log back to the start start flirting start to finish finish the story finish it off off guard off the wall wall to wall wall of shame shame on you shame and honor honor in death honor killing killing me softly killing for pleasure pleasure to know pleasure party party animal party queen queen of hearts queen of passion passion to write passion for fashion fashion model fashion experience experience desire experience lust lust for you lust to dominate dominate... YOU... Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/30/2014 3:48:00 PM

Hi Eileen! I must admit that this Blitz business is all new to me, but you sure blitzed your way down to a winning ending! Very enjoyable. I'm tempted to have a go!! // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/29/2014 12:31:00 PM

Eileen, I refuse to choose between love or lust, I want both, after all lusting for the one you love keeps the fires burning....love this passionate write of yours. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:52:00 PM

Hey...you've been away for some time. So glad you came back to visit. Yes...LUST does have it's place. I can't negate that fact. Thanks for pointing that out. Hugs!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/29/2014 12:02:00 PM

I started to write a blitz poem but stopped half through..then didn't get back.to it,But Hey girl you did take the blitz challenge on amazing heights of lust and the way it dominates with its soft pleasury tips : ).Lovely!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:53:00 PM

Thanks, my sweet. Soft Pleasury tips...You are so amazing with the way you word things! Hugs

Robert Ludden

Date: 7/29/2014 11:53:00 AM

..........and you do.

Robert Ludden
Date: 7/29/2014 4:32:00 PM

of course!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:54:00 PM

Do I? Shall I respond in kind?

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/29/2014 9:43:00 AM

Blitz..hmmm...interesting. My favorite line is "pleasure party" ...im gonna use that one on my wife! There's a street here called Pleasure Ave. I like to turn down it when she is in the truck with me. When she asks where we're going, I happily declare, "Im takin' you down Pleasure Avenue, and I intend to get lost, baby!"

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:19:00 AM

Oh Caleb...Caleb...I hope your wife appreciates you! You are amazing! :) She better like to get lost on that Avenue with ya! How sweet!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/29/2014 1:55:00 AM

" Kiss of Death...Kiss of Fire " I love how you work this form. There is a ravishing continuity to your subconscious. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thank you, Justin...Ravishing is one of my favorite words. :) I'd take kiss of fire over kiss of death....any day! Thanks for visiting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2014 5:07:00 PM

Eileen. Of all these blitzes I have been reading, yours is one of my favorites! So full of passion, just like YOU.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:21:00 AM

THAT IS SUCH A COMPLIMENT, ANDREA! Honestly...MUSIC TO MY EARS. Hugs

Moein Jr

Date: 7/28/2014 3:14:00 PM

"A great mystery is...to dominate you"I've never seen such harmonious piece before.This blitz is strangely wonderful,Enjoyed!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:23:00 AM

Strangely wonderful! I lovely that adverb and adjective together! Lovely, Moein. Thanks for visiting my work. I'm glad you liked it!

Ken Carroll

Date: 7/28/2014 1:03:00 PM

A heartfelt stellar write Eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/28/2014 1:36:00 PM

Stellar...an adjective that is music to my ears. Thanks, Ken.

J. R. Corbin

Date: 7/28/2014 12:56:00 PM

I am always amazed when gifted poets display fascinating talent. you, my friend, are both gifted and fascinating.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:23:00 AM

Lovely adjectives that you have used to describe me, JR. I'm ever grateful!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2014 11:14:00 AM

Have another look at mine, I have added a number of lines.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 10:24:00 AM

Did...Lovely! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2014 11:04:00 AM

Yes, I think this is a dominant performance Eileen. I was swept along your poetic path.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/28/2014 11:05:00 AM

:) I'm supremely glad to know that, Richard.....Thanks ever so much for visiting me!!! You bring me smiles.