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Love Me Not, Love Me More

LOVE ME NOT, LOVE ME MORE Love me not, love me more Love me now until forevermore... Gaze meet, nothing much to miss Hot nerves shoot in happy bliss Clouds above grin in delight so with sunshine golden light. Love me not, love me more Love me now until forevermore... You hold my hand to yours clasping it tight, not letting go Through all tears and all joys let affection a river overflow... Love me not, love me more.. Love me now 'til forevermore... Partners, we sing... sing along uncaring who can hear the song Irrigating our veins with a wish of love peacefully settled like a rock dove Love me not, Love me more Love me now 'til forevermore... Yes! that's we both want to hear from honeyed lips of someone dear. Touch my face, stroke my hair speak sweet, tell only my name. Love me not, love me more Love me now 'til forevermore.. Until all the mountains reach the skies or the moon kiss the starlight shine Should all the rosebud hurry blush or the painter's brush draw in rush.. Love me not love me more Love me now 'til forevermore... _____________________________________ 11:21pm, August 29, 2014

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Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:05:00 PM

Olive, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2015 9:39:00 PM

Congrats on huge win dear Olive with this superb write!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/4/2015 3:58:00 AM

Beautiful!!!!! Congrats Olive! ;-)

Jason Conley

Date: 10/30/2014 6:50:00 AM

Beautiful composition and flow :) Well done!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 10:01:00 AM

thanks much!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/8/2014 4:17:00 AM

You the only one who observe that Justin..:) that extremes I tried to portray..:) thanks much..:)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/7/2014 1:16:00 PM

Exquisite love, I love it! There is such a sweet riddle in the beautiful "Love me not love me more, love me now till forevermore", reminds of natural love's extremes and It's refusal to surrender Olive. " Irrigating our veins with a wish of love..." special! I'm so glad I read this beauty today...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2015 11:51:00 AM

This a late thank you for your generous remarks on my poem Justin..

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2014 10:51:00 AM

This is very lovely Olive_eloi. Through simple wishes you ask for beautiful love to grow and flourish. Now, who could be worthy of calling your name with love and affection?! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/2/2014 5:40:00 AM

I really don't know who Paul.. How I wish, i hope and i pray soon sooon i ll know.. :)) God;s will be done.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2014 5:44:00 AM

- Dear Olive, oh .... this is really a beautiful poem !!! - Love is the whole life, the whole flower, the whole fruit ..... EVERYTHING !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thanks much Anne Lise for the drop by..:) thanks for the support sorry for not replying immediately..:( GBU

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/30/2014 11:40:00 PM

Beautiful Olive and an awesome write. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 11:42:00 PM

Thank you Verlena for this drop by..:) GBU

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2014 5:13:00 PM

Delightful warm poetry, oozing feelings of a wanting tomorrow, love me more, no sorrow - James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 11:42:00 PM

Thank you James..:) really appreciate your drop by..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/29/2014 1:05:00 PM

How beautiful Olive...I am sensing some true feelings here.....could it be :)....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 2:17:00 AM

not really Tim.. still am praying and still am weighing things up.. don;t want to be in a hurry .

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/29/2014 10:37:00 AM

Oh Olive this is such a lovely write dear! Love all the beautiful simile packed verses especially the first one! Amazing work!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2014 2:16:00 AM

Thanks much DR. Upma.. :) I appreciate you still dropping by.. am sorry i have not been here to reply immediately.. God bless you.. :)