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Love's Like Sugar Cane

Love's Like Sugar Cane Tender tendrils of the same vine, we entwine with hearts a fluttering, beating ecstatically as one, floating on wings of iridescent butterflies, satisfyingly satiated by love juices squeezed from an orange, bright summer day. Cherry blossom kisses from pink juicy lips, sprouting silky petals that pucker and quiver, anticipating warm, tropical, sugar cane, sweet licks. Blissfully drunk with love, we sip and dip into the golden syrupy ocean of us. 07-24-2015 Contest: The Poet's Fire (12-07-2017) Sponsor: Gregory R Barden Placement: 1st Contest: A Sexy Surreal (06-11-2017) Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Plaement: 3rd Contest: One of your Best (01-07-2016) Sponsor: Rob Carmack Placement: 4th Contest: Shweet Free Verse (07-29-2015) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 3rd

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Dm Babbit

Date: 12/12/2017 11:04:00 AM

Just wonderful expressions, loved your poem, congrats on your win. Well deserved.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/17/2017 4:18:00 PM

Thank you kindly my dear DM for your kind congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/9/2017 3:49:00 PM

Pandita, congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win for your beautifully-written poem! Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/10/2017 8:55:00 AM

Hi Sandra, your lovely compliments warm my heart and sweetened my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 12/8/2017 11:43:00 AM

Wonderful sensuous write, worthy first place winner!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 11:52:00 AM

Dear John, thank you kindly for your high praises which mean a lot to me! Best wishes. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2017 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on your top win Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 10:24:00 AM

Hi Joseph, many thanks, my friend for your kind congratulatory words! Have a relaxing weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/8/2017 7:28:00 AM

What a delectable pen Pandita! Congratulations on your top win! xomo!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 8:03:00 AM

Hi Maureen, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2017 7:13:00 AM

A delicious mix of imagery! Congrat, Pandita, on your top win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 10:26:00 AM

Hi Kim, it's nice to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments. Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Peter Rees

Date: 12/8/2017 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your very fine poem and your well-deserved win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 10:19:00 AM

Awwww! Thank you so much, Peter! I appreciate your kind words! Best wishes. Pandita

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/7/2017 11:38:00 PM

Pandita - this was so rife with innuendo, metaphor, imagery, and creative excellence, ALL of it very sensual and sexy - this just bowled me over! Congratulations on FIRST PLACE, and thank you so much for your patience. Blessings! :-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2017 8:08:00 AM

Hi Gregory, thank you so very much for giving First Place to this piece! I am honored and super thrilled! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/13/2017 2:16:00 PM

Hi Pandita. Congrats for your well, deserved 3rd placement in the contest!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2017 12:37:00 PM

Hi Teddy, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! Best wishes. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2017 5:59:00 PM

Wow Pandita this is sensational and very sensual! I see why it is a top winner. Congratulations! : )

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/13/2017 10:00:00 AM

Dear Connie, your lovely compliments warm my heart and sweeten my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Chris Green

Date: 6/12/2017 3:01:00 PM

This was gorgeous my friend, so sticky sweet and sugary sensual. Congrats on you placement in the contest.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/13/2017 10:00:00 AM

Hi Chris, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2017 6:24:00 AM

Sweet ecstasy...Congrats on your win Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2017 12:17:00 PM

Awwww! Thank you so much, dear Joseph! I appreciate your kind words! Hugs. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2016 11:11:00 PM

PANDITA, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/14/2016 12:06:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you so very much for your kind congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/11/2016 6:22:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this sensual write, Pandita! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/12/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thank you kindly my dear friend for your sweet congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/9/2016 3:42:00 AM

Greetings Pandita. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/9/2016 5:31:00 PM

Hi Teddy, you're so sweet for leaving me your lovely compliments and congratulations! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 7:39:00 PM

Pandita, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/9/2016 5:27:00 PM

Hi Skat, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Jean Mcloughlin

Date: 1/7/2016 2:01:00 PM

Such an inspiring write Pandita!! Congrats. From Jean

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/9/2016 5:33:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, dear Jean, for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments! Enjoy your day! Pandita

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/7/2016 1:33:00 PM

Congrats Pandita! Who wouldn't be drunk with such a read?

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/9/2016 5:29:00 PM

Hi Balveen, thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments. You helped to make my day brighter! All the best. Pandita

Constance La France

Date: 8/9/2015 9:44:00 PM

Pandita congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my poem, February

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/9/2015 9:51:00 PM

Oh, thank you kindly my dear friend for your sweet congratulations which I so very much appreciate! Have a restful night, BW! Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2015 10:20:00 PM

Congrats on this fine win my friend! Amazing poem and being blissfully drunk with love, I can testify to the ocean being syrupy.. A7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/2/2015 9:44:00 AM

Hi Robert, I know you know what I'm saying:-)! Many thanks, my friend, for your lovely congratualtions and high rating! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:23:00 PM

This poem sounds scrumptious to me, Pandita! Congrats on your win :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/31/2015 6:51:00 PM

Dear Laura, your lovely compliments warm my heart and shweeten my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by! Have an enjoyable weekend! Pandita

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/30/2015 10:26:00 AM

This is as sweet as it can be...... love the line "saturated with an orange, bright summer day! " Like a wonderful Nehi orange soda.... it reminds me of my teenaged summers! Congrats to you!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2015 12:39:00 PM

Hi Carrie, it is so good to hear from you and an honor to receive your wonderful comments and compliments. You helped to make my day brighter! Thank you so much! All the best. Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2015 7:10:00 AM

This was so sweet and perfect! Nicely done.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2015 7:27:00 AM

Hi Casarah, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 7/30/2015 4:35:00 AM

Wow! This is exquisite, Pandita! This poem flows and tempts with suggestive imagery. It is tastefully rich and sweet, offering sensual delights. A fav and a 7rating. ~ Congrats on a merited win. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2015 7:31:00 AM

Hi Paul, you're so sweet for leaving me your lovely compliments and congratulations! Thank you so much for your high rating, kind encouraging words, and support! Have a shweet day! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:34:00 AM

amazing win

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2015 7:29:00 AM

Hi SKAT, I so appreciate your lovely congratulations! That's so shweet! Thank you very much! Pandita