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LOVE IN THE MAKING

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LOVE IN THE MAKING

months, year, decades in the making..
this may how a love story develops..

sometimes, the girl or guy next to us..
maybe the person of whom we have been waiting for..

frequently and fervently, we pray to God..
that He may let us meet face-to-face him or her..

but, have we also ask ourselves?
If we are doing our part?

blessed are those who accepted the feeling..
with that in one way or another did something..

placing every ounce of effort ..
allotting not just time but the all self..

verbally too easy to say the words..
yet, notionally so hard to demonstrate..

love relationships are put on trials and tests..
at these times, persons involve will willingly work..

whether to stand by what it is..
or turn back and give up..

by: olive_eloi
9:43pm
10/27/2013

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  1. Date: 11/3/2014 3:43:00 PM
    Oh to be involved in Love in the making. One day some day, James :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 3:37:00 AM
    - Yes you are right, "love relationship is put to trials and tests .." - A nice poem to read, well written Olive !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/23/2014 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks,, :) anne lise.. now that am trying to resave all my poems.. ive seen so many comments you leave.. thank sso much for being one of my inspiration .. :)