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Love Free - Notes Added

Soft subtle brushes floating in a sea of anticipation bubble across jagged scars running effortlessly upon a beaten chest eye lashes flickering flirting every time a simple hum in satisfaction flows out the corners of a muted mouth a tongue twisted and tied from the beauty glowing gliding effortlessly washing away pain hibernating in a sedated heart waiting for step sisters to step aside allow shadowed dancers to proceed and locked up lovers to live free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/4/2016 2:41:00 AM
Locked up lovers to live free - I can so much relate to that, sometimes I feel like a cinder girl.
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Date: 9/1/2016 10:31:00 AM
This is a uniquely creative write, Tim. I hope your Cinderella eventually found happiness. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:20:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...a different take and point of view...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/28/2016 10:40:00 PM
Leave me breathless to the last words...I enjoyed the way it is composed and presented. Well done. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/28/2016 9:44:00 PM
This is amazing, what could have inspired such a write, I am curious! :)
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