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Love Colors

His arms postured and reaching like branches With the strength and vigor of the wind His eyes are charismatic as a sapphire open sea With moony wisps of salty air setting me free And I am wrapped around his heart Love has triggered a ruby hunger Emotions have swelled as the heat of a summer day Cherry plum lips so feverishly ripe Hearts of fire are eternally linked Lovers tempest sentiment cry aloud Profoundly stuttering the venerable soul Forever passing in an enchanted state Having painted butterflies and turquoise fairy dust Tenderness knows no limits of tone Her twinkling aurora of colors rise in the darkness Grasping at the echoes, and a moment in time The driving of measurable love sublime (Dedication to my husband John )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 3:44:00 PM
Very Beautiful poem you are really intelligent and use your word with great ease.... you comment on my suicide thoughts poem, lol yea I'm good, i don't want to kill myself, i just was expanding my writing skills... thanks you are a good friend
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:24:00 PM
My word! So beautiful and filled with love, Laura. He must be in heaven. :) Just for you, I posted a couple of pic's of my little girl and baby boy for you in my photos. :) Thanks for your support and enjoy! Kristin
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:46:00 PM
What a lovely dedication to your husband . This wonderful poem speaks of such devotion, you are truly so blessed. In the world today, this is a precious, and sacred thing to have...what a lucky couple you are!~love, Carrie
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:45:00 PM
Laura, this is an absolutely exquisite dedication to your husband. You share an amazing bond and an obvious magical connection. This poem is proof positive. So beautiful!!! (Check your soup mail please). Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:46:00 PM
Smile~Yes, as I read this passionately perfect write again~it just reinforced my belief in what a truly terrific writer "You" most assuringly are!!!:):)~Very romantic and burning with "The Beauty of Your Love~Excellent Write!!!:):)~"My Love To 'You & All Your Loves,' Always, John!!!:):) On we go....
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:39:00 PM
Smile~What an absolutely beautiful dedication~one of Your most profoundly deep and brilliantly colorful writes which I have ever read, "Dear Gifted & Lovely Laura Mckenzie!!!:):)~I have been on/am on vacation! So I have a lot of catching up to do dear lady! Smile~And what a wonderful poem to read near the beginning of this journey!!!:):)....cont....
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