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Hand in hand Sandy beach with beautiful sunset in love What could be more romantic than when the sun is glowing red and orange melts into the sea somewhere And two who are in love and goes hand in hand A small box On his knees in the wet sand beach Will you be mine She blushes as the sunset Smiles her lovely smile Yes, I would The sun melts into the sea somewhere But for a couple in love, the night is still young 08.02.2013 A-L Andresen :) ("mix poem" )

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Date: 10/14/2014 10:39:00 AM
this is so very sweet anne lise deep beautiful piece golden pen
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2014 12:00:00 PM
- Thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Liam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2014 2:08:00 PM
Anne Lise This is so sweet and romantic, Full of passion and love. Nice write. Thanks for the congrats on my Taming A Heart poem
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Date: 3/1/2014 2:50:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/3/2013 9:07:00 PM
beautiful is all i have to say about this poem
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Date: 6/4/2013 1:39:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and your kind comments, Kevin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/22/2013 12:28:00 PM
This charms me no end, anne... a way of sweet passion drifts accross the page... a most woderfu; write as always..:) huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2013 12:30:00 PM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/22/2013 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Anne. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry, you might like it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2013 11:42:00 AM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jiril. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2013 4:04:00 AM
Yes , this is a lovely poem. The sunset is so warming to vow of devotion
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 4:12:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Stacey. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/18/2013 8:31:00 AM
lovely poem, sounds so sweet :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2013 4:32:00 PM
love it Anne - Lisa,,,, don't know how I've missed this gem,,,,thank you for reading my Caturday haiku's, you have an awesome weekend xo's ;}
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2013 3:59:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 6:41:00 AM
love at it best. :) Love it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2013 6:48:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sasha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2013 3:08:00 PM
Simply beautiful. :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2013 3:11:00 PM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, AE S-K. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2013 12:20:00 PM
I enjoy reading your work and I learn from them Tank you for that and for your wonderful comments. Tac
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM
hi hi hi my sweetest Poetess dearest Anne Lise :) i love this piece so much :) so romantic <3 and yes so beautifully written :) thank you for sharing <3 <3 <3 :) Sk
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Date: 3/13/2013 2:53:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2013 4:51:00 PM
nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sean. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2013 1:50:00 PM
I have always been a romantic at heart. I love the way you put this together and I do love a plan that comes together. Great write Anna-lise God Bless. Dave.
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:52:00 PM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dave. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2013 12:04:00 PM
So lovely !! Sweet romance at it's best...love it!!
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2013 1:44:00 AM
i love this its so amazing:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 7:27:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/17/2013 8:59:00 AM
A beautiful verse for my early morning read...Love really can be joyful! Cynthia
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Date: 2/17/2013 11:29:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Cynthia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2013 11:08:00 PM
This is evoking a freshness of love affairs harmonizing with nature's kind act. Thanks for sharing this. (^_^)
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:28:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Noel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2013 10:50:00 PM
gosh, it also almost looks like that beatlemania contest too. Didn't they have a song called love sweet love? Good stuff, sweetie!
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2013 9:31:00 PM
Oh the is just beautiful...it has so much emotion and imagery. Good job! Thanks for your comments and always thinking about me..xxoo Holly Moore
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2013 9:42:00 AM
It's a true magic poem certainly many will remind back, no chance to deny. Thanks my sweet friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2013 11:56:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2013 7:48:00 AM
Awwwwww....how sweet and romantic and dreamy! :) Love ya! Thanks for the encouragement you give to me always! God bless you for it! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2013 11:55:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2013 11:53:00 AM
Very romantic, Anne Lisa - the sand, the beach, two lovers and the sun melting into the sea. By the way, happy Valentine's Day. Love, daver
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2013 12:00:00 PM
Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Daver. - Happy V-Day ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2013 11:17:00 AM
Well written. I like it. xoxox Isaiah Zerbst :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2013 11:24:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2013 4:40:00 AM
Took me away...sooo deep ...beautiful write...thanks :-)
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:16:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, W.C. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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