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With respect there’s nothing I will omit saying I love you within this poem, every word I write weaves in orbit whilst time casts its spell, old age the victim. But to you with eyes so bright hopes convey confident words from the heart will remain, although long time since, this love knows no sway whilst together we stroll down sunset lane. The bond we share sincerely holding hands each day gladly passes from smile to smile, abound with joy in our star cross lands thanking God every step of the mile. If only I could live this life again a reflection of these moments always!. © Harry J Horsman 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/10/2012 12:43:00 AM
ha loves young dream , nice xx
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Date: 9/21/2011 5:40:00 PM
That was an amazingly well written poem, though i have not read others of yours i plan too. Well i wish you well
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Date: 9/12/2011 5:10:00 PM
lovely serene words within this sonnet...thanks for commenting on my haiku :-)
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Date: 9/12/2011 11:27:00 AM
a more beautiful poem on love I have not read Harry.. am making this a new favorite as luv makes my world go round and this needs to be in a gold frame hanging on a lovely wall like a mural .. touching lines from the heart my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:46:00 PM
This is such a sweet and romantic sonnet, Harry :) Made me smile, just knowing that you have that someone you feel this special for... beautiful sentiments here :D Really happy to see new posts from you!
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Date: 8/29/2011 4:07:00 PM
Wonderful verse that captures the imagination with a dear love story.
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:33:00 AM
It's great to read a new poem of you Harry after a long time.A very emotional beautiful Sonnet here.
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:48:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Harry. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:24:00 AM
Welcome back Harry and with a gem like this :) Absolutely enjoyed this write of yours.. How are you doing? love Wilma
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