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Love, Not Really

Love you came with a tickle from my nape down to my feet, like fresh fruit from the vine, you tasted delectably sweet. A brush of softest feather, blood coursing through my veins, love you taught me your lessons, studious, I’m glad you came. In the heated glow of morning, in deep ebony disguise, love came at every hour; love came with truths and lies. I asked for more and more of you; I begged you please don’t go. I tried to beguile you, tried to seduce, your affections were for show. Oh, Love you were a prankster, not really true love at all, but wow, you knew just how to please. I’m grateful that you called… I'll never condone your deception, I don’t like to be taunted or teased, but for you, I’ll keep on begging, please once more…come back, please. Written 3/8/15 for Love or Hate Pick A Subject #2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/18/2015 7:57:00 PM
They say there is a fine line between love and hate and you described it beautifully! Excellent write and win Rhonda! Hugs
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Date: 3/13/2015 8:18:00 AM
Fantastic piece, congratulations!
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Date: 3/12/2015 2:33:00 AM
Wonderful write Rhonda! Big congrats on ur win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 3:17:00 PM
I am so glad to read this was fiction Rhonda - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 6:10:00 AM
Reading your poems is a learning experience to me Rhonda. Who can think of such line like"...in deep ebony disguise" or"....Love you came with a tickle from my nape down to my feet, like fresh fruit from the vine..." Congrats on your deserved win. God bless. Hugs!>>>rajat
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Date: 3/11/2015 12:26:00 AM
well done! Grats on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:30:00 PM
Great write and win Rhonda....congrats
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Date: 3/10/2015 8:50:00 PM
I agree totally with Andrea very worthy entry congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 3/9/2015 6:40:00 PM
It's like Jan's. Both love AND hate. It's a GREAT entry. It would be on MY list if this were my contest. I have one at home to post but I won't be home until about two more hours. I am scared I will miss it because it filled up super fast today! yikes. BTW, how is our "project" coming along. Do you and Jan have at least ten examples?
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Date: 3/9/2015 12:46:00 PM
ohh, the dance of love tugging then distancing, rhonda.. a poetic delight.. huggs
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:48:00 AM
Your poem takes a glimpse of love's fickle nature in and delivers its message well. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:50:00 AM
Rhonda, wonderful entry for the contest, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, under the full moon . . .
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Date: 3/9/2015 8:47:00 AM
I love it...beautiful write...sometimes love comes with heartbreak.....hugs
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:15:00 PM
Wow, I love this! It's a delight reading a poem with so much ease and ends up smiling. Thank you!
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:47:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this love poem. The honesty is fresh and shines. Good luck in the contest!! Hugs, Kimberly
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/8/2015 10:20:00 PM
Thanks, Kimberly...just having some fun for Shadow's contest. :)
Date: 3/8/2015 9:16:00 PM
I sure hope this is fiction, but a beautiful emotion felt poem!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/8/2015 10:19:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur...yes, completely fictitious...just having a little fun for the contest. :)

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