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Lost Universe Love

The stars whisk through the sky.
I move to a city a hundred miles away.

The moon glazes upon the shimmering ocean blue.
I rest my arms across the table contemplating whether this could be false or true.

A supernova collapses light years in the past.
Our love would never last.

The universe on it’s great expansion,
as our distance had an abortion.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Another awesome one! Love your style. Write on! You have much talent. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:45:00 AM
    Wow awesome astral poem in metaphor. Poetic starry craft! And thnx.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:28:00 AM
    I don't like it.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:35:00 PM
    The last line is confusing though I do realize you are juxtaposing birth & death Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Lovely expressions on love and lost love, Christian,

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:40:00 PM
    this is extremely pretty. Skat

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:28:00 PM
    I like what you are saying here and I enjoyed this piece. I wish your rhymes had been a little tighter and more succinct, but I think you have a good piece, nonetheless. Kudos! :)