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Lost In the Dark - Michael J,Falotico

* LOST IN THE DARK * ( Collaboration ) by~ Poet Destroyer I'm crossing every memory in the dark I can feel your vibes missing their spark I reach out to touch your silent way You push me away without a word to say Neglected by your arms, you will not have me anymore? My lids dim as you walk out the door Without you I'm lost and this dark will forever exceed Can you forgive me for this ugliness and greed? by~ Michael J.F. I was pushed and shoved to the ground.. Although I fell without a touch or a sound.. I looked up to see your surprising face.. Blindsided by you I lay in disgrace.. I see the pain and forgiveness in your eyes.. How can I stay here with all the why's.. Your tears roll down as I walk through shadows and away.. You have left our lives dark and in disarray... (A Poet Destroyer Collaboration)

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:55:00 PM

awesome **SKAT**

Nathan D.

Date: 10/27/2011 10:12:00 AM

you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/26/2011 12:27:00 AM

oh we do seem to be on fire Michael and I ... creatively wow.. ??? wow too.. haha..ssshhh between BFF's ONLY ...oh must take care of pooh bear or else..haha..

M.I.A .

Date: 8/23/2011 2:23:00 AM

two of my fave poets came together and the result is Stunning! you guys managed to keep the 'dark' emotion flowing till the end yet leaving a trail of hope somehow. always enjoyed reading you PD

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/16/2011 2:36:00 PM

This is very great! You both are so talented, in dark and romance poems. I like it, like it, like it!!! :) I love how they blamed each other in this poem. Sometimes, eventhough you know u're not the one to blamed, u still realize someway somehow you contribute a part.

James Foulk

Date: 8/16/2011 12:22:00 PM

a great write, thank you for commenting on Teasing the Bull.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 6:14:00 PM

well PD my BFF another great coupling in poetry luv and a little on the sad side but Michael is good as all he writes as are u my friend.. he and I are going to do another collab soon..so look for it luv.. your BFF for life..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:54:00 PM

All these collaborations are so good! Another beauty here, PD

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/15/2011 1:22:00 PM

Your collaboration produces in magic ways, nicely penned. Enjoyed both. Thanks for sharing. bl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/15/2011 12:26:00 PM

PD this was a such a challenge and a joy to work with you on this. I was so much hoping I was able to compliment your words and endless talent. Throw me another my dear poet friend. Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/15/2011 11:20:00 AM

This sure is a different collab from you two-- really liked this one as well :) One could sure read that love lost-- yay to you both for writing another collab-- ooh btw I read Chris comments below, he beat me to the typo thingies...;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 10:47:00 AM

Lovely one, thanks for sharing,

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2011 8:23:00 AM

Well done!! you both are so talented....hope to see more of your collaborations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 11:27:00 PM

this poem is for fun... thank you Michael, for another collaboration. I figure women have a dark side too... have a nice one,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/14/2011 11:29:00 PM

lolo.. did i get your last name right Michael...