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Lost In Space

There once was a Vulcan named Spock
So sad when those humans would mock
His strange pointy ears
He would burst into tears...
So he finally had both of them cropped!

There once was a Captain named Kirk
Quite known around town as a jerk!
While the Enterprise docked
As he viewed Mister Spock
He scoffed at those chopped ears that hurt!!

Ship mates of the Enterprise crew
Were sad to know Spock was so blue...
So they grabbed Captain Kirk
By his feet and his shirt
Tossed him from the ship, ...out he flew!!

All evidence quickly erased
A murder has left not a trace
'Tho Kirk may be long gone...
He lives on in re-runs !!
So trekkies can still see his face!!

Copyright © Carrie Richards

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:59:00 AM
    lol...cute poem, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Good morning Carrie, , You Star Trek fan :-)~ , a nice and awesome win... always looking forward in reading and following all your winning poems... Luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Carrie, , CONGRATS! thank you very much for this one... love your entry.... enjoy my newest poem :) SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:50:00 AM
    HaHa!...Do you remember the show 'Lost in Space?' Hilarious!...I forget the robot's name but once they built a female robot and the other robot got jealous...He was very depressed and the boy Will was consoling him saying something like 'Has she been giving you a hard time again?' To which the robot sadly replied...'She called me a gear'

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Ha I was watching an old star treck in hospital having no choice of what was on, but I enjoyed it, perhaps I was more ill than I thought, like this though Carrie congratulations xx

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Lol on the funny. Carrie congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:06:00 AM
    lol... I enjoyed this, as an old trekkie fan. Congrats on your win, Carrie. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Hi Carrie, glad Andrea, enjoyed this fun to read poem. Congratulations :-) always~ LINDA .

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:03:00 PM
    CArrie, honestly, you could have left off the last three stanzas and won. It was the first one that won my heart!! Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 4:56:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks with this nice series using the limerick form. Great write! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 8:42:00 AM
    Good spin, I enjoyed it Congrats

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 11:54:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie on your place, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 11:26:00 AM
    Four times Wonderful!! ...and funny! Congratulations on your deserved win in Carolyn's contest, Carrie!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 1:58:00 AM
    Very clever write and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Carrie. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 7:38:00 PM
    Congrats Carrie on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. u are on a nice run Carrie and enjoy this special victory too .. happy to be sharing the spotlight with u..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 5:28:00 PM
    Great, any of your verses could have been the winner. Good job. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 12:33:00 PM
    Congratulations Carrie on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest, superb Limerick >> James

  1. Date: 3/19/2010 10:38:00 AM
    I enjoyed this dispute between Kirk and Spock, Carrie. Cute limerick series! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 1:58:00 AM
    Hi Carie, Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Whether in Your Neck of the Woods” blog. Smiles, Dane Ann