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Thy Native Land

The island Once naive now tainted by the winds of change Once native now giving birth to a race of diverse cultures Once a peaceful place now disturbed by a rapid modern world The island Once their home our home my home has become an uncertain place in the heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2016 2:38:00 PM
Patti, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:32:00 AM
Patti, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:03:00 AM
Profound write this! It is never easy when the place we call home becomes destroyed right in front of our eyes - you've brought it out well. Well penned Patti!
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Date: 8/10/2013 5:09:00 PM
Lost... and found. Write on. Tell us more!
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:50:00 AM
Thank You, Patti, what a wonderful poem.
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM
U r welcome
Date: 3/15/2011 4:08:00 PM
very well put about your home. welcome to poetry soup.
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words:)
Date: 3/14/2011 7:10:00 AM
Very true and insightful work
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:16:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/14/2011 4:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patti. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/13/2011 3:08:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup,very nice creative work
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/13/2011 5:52:00 AM
Creative and thoughtful write on Lost Culture, Patti
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 11/8/2011 8:22:00 PM
Thank you:)

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