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Loss - Lee Ramage

LOSS by~ LEE RAMAGE Just as poems paint a picture And songs take you on a journey How do I keep you with me Now that you’re no longer here I am pink clay and you are blue Mold and mix us together Separation is near impossible An image is drawn in my mind by~ Poet Destroyer The images you draw in my mind Are enjoying the swirl clouds of pink and blue Clever as one on a calm night Loss is never forever, Mold me and hold me You will see the journey will paint a picture near the sea Twist me into a midnight reality Mix us into the wilderness that will never separate There you will find the perfect clay and create~ A poem without loss and endless possibilities ~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 10:49:00 PM
awesome collab
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:02:00 PM
Last time I came to this one was in 2013. now I am here to tell you that I think this is one of your best qualities as a poet: to be able to take what one poet has done and merge with them into creating more beautiful work! I left you some soupmails. now I need to get going!
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Date: 2/25/2013 2:34:00 PM
hi, PD. thanks for my placements in your contests if I did't say it yet today!! Luv , andrea
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:03:00 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:16:00 AM
wow this is chalked full of imagery very emotional piece, you both work so well together
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:01:00 PM
enjoyed reading today....reminds me of the pink and blue sunset sky....very beautiful!!
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Date: 9/12/2011 10:51:00 AM
wow, excellent collaboration, this is brilliant, will be hard to beat good luck. Harry
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Date: 9/11/2011 10:18:00 PM
You both did a great joy with the collaboration Linda, especially the last two lines. So nice.
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:26:00 PM
This is a wonderful collaboration effort! I am very happy to have read it!! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 9/11/2011 5:54:00 PM
wow, Lee inspired you with one of the very best ones yet! Geat creativity from the both of you! What will your restaurant be called, Irma? And will Nathan be a part of it?? CAn you see your comments today? Soup won't let me do it! So I am doing it thru the "view" part of my poems. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:17:00 PM
Very romantic stuff. Love it. Good collaboration. Love, daver.
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Date: 9/11/2011 11:07:00 AM
This is amazing. You two talked a about loss in a different way.
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Date: 9/11/2011 8:10:00 AM
nicely done.. cory
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:27:00 AM
Great collaboration with Lee..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:58:00 AM
WOW...I never read a collaboration before and I must say that was a beautiful piece of work.CHEERS to you and your partner Lee on a job well done!!
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:33:00 AM
enchanting poetry from u and Lee PD my BFF .. emotions are deeply expressed and once again u have complimented her so well.. good luck luv.. we are home from vaca..oh shopping all day for groceries and office supplies for hubby..oh.. and ..are u near those dreadful fires in Austin? so sad so many homes lost luv.. your BFF..
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:19:00 AM
lol~ thought I was done... got a few more collaborations... Lee, thank you for the honor to work with you. This has been lots of fun. I really liked my response hope you enjoy mine as well... sorry i went the opposite way with this.. take care,..p.d.
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