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My head is set in a dark tunnel, 
my mind is racing with 
questions. The way the feelings 
are shooting through me i feel 
as if im submerged with 
electric. Im shaking. Eyes are a 
pool of water, i cant control 
myself. Emotions are 
overwhelming me. I keep 
telling myself everything is 
going to be ok but as the day 
unfolds the weaker i get. Am i 
willingly feeling this again? My 
heart ask why. Wishing i could 
look into your soul to see if im 
there. Im empty. The world has 
conceived you and taken you as 
there's. but you once were 
mine now your anonymous. 
Where is the one i once loved? 
Are you him? Why so different? 
The miles are between us but 
my love should have kept you 
home! Your not my pocket 
buddy, but i miss the friend i 
had in you! You use to protect 
me from the hurt. You use to 
shield my eyes from the bad. 
You showed me a new. But why 
now as the miles grow greater 
do you drift from my love? I 
keep you with me even when 
your not, i act as if the hidden 
isn't safe, but why? Why am i 
not with you? Why do you keep 
the unknown hidden? Why am i 
not enough? Can you say you 
love me and be sincere?   Or is 
honesty to much to ask for? I 
want my best friend back!! 
Deep down inside i know in my 
heart i know your still mine. 
Can you love me like im right 
next to you? Can you talk to 
me like nobody else? Can you 
stay mine like im the only girl 
on earth? I love you like its no 
tomorrow! I yearn for you like 
my body is pure. And i admire 
you like your face is the only 
face i see! But why is it hard to 
love me? You said you were 
mine! ALL MINE! Why do you 
do what you do? My heart is 
yours, but its broken and 
worthless. Loosened and hurt i 
look at you drift from me 
without even hearing you cry 
for help! Am i not the one who 
you wants to save you? My 
heart tells me to keep 
swimming for you, but the 
water is getting to shallow. 
Help me help you. Swim back 
to me! Take my hand! The 
ways of the water is taking you 
further...take my hand! Cry for 
help! Know that im trying! Your 
loosened grip slips and your 
drifting. Hurry! Im here!

Copyright © Jazmine Hunter

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