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Living Vivid

The orange flowers attract bumble bees
Yellow and black bees stung my red knees
Dance round flailing and wailing  crimson legs
Devilish dimples arose;  scratch pegs
Several amber ants stung white toes

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Oh, dear, this is a vivid way to live, enjoyed this poem Doris.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Well this is just a buzz of a write Doris, I`ll bet the air was filled with all sorts of noises at this taste of summers attractions.." LOL} Hope you are well Joe.)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Love it! I'm a bizarre individual who doesn't feel it when bees or wasps sting, at least not at first. After ending up with a calcium lump from one I wonder whether I'd be better off with the initial pain.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:36:00 AM
    Very expressive work..I hope not but just some funny thoughts..Once long ago I was stung by a hornet walking to the mail box..Not any fun..Mom

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:20:00 AM
    ha ha ha... i love this fascinating Limerick of yours my dear friend, Doris. I remember when I was a child. I was fond of going to the garden to pick some flowers or catch dragonflies and I got stung by a bumble bee, lol. I've enjoyed reading your work tonight. Thank you so much for sharing it. More power and graces always!!! love and hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Creative write friend Doris.thanks for sharing. Have a nice day..hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Cute title for this one. I think it would make one quite livid indeed!! Your mom talked about those ants in one of her poems too!!

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 6:57:00 PM
    Living in the country, I'm always on the lookout for those nasty little creatures! My son once was stung by a bee on the lip and his face became unrecognizable! Great read... hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:14:00 PM
    Those pesky bugs and you never know when they want to bite. A cute poem Doris. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 7:29:00 AM
    nicely done.thanx for reading my stuff.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Did you hear my chuckle? Reading this one pulled one from me. Enjoyed this Limerick. thanks for reading me. One love Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 3:46:00 PM
    you sure were having a bad time there Doris, love your poetry version of it all though.....

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 1:47:00 PM
    lol, had a chuckle here, Doris. Hope you are much better now

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:49:00 AM
    Doris; this is so cute. I have been stung by bees before and that was not funny. Nice work here. Thanks for reading- ( The Moon Cried ) Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Dern bugs! Who needs 'em!? Fun rhyme, Doris! Very fun-knee! :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:17:00 PM
    impishly delightful, doris... some really wonderful, colorful wordcraft here... enjoyed!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Ha ha, not laughing at you poem my friend, just at the poor dilemma of being stung multiple times by different animals, bugs! This is an awesome limerick! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Good.... flowers and bumble bees.....A sting that really hurts. - hugs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:11:00 AM
    Funny and painful at the same time. I hate those fire ants. Should do well in the contest.