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Little League

The crack of the bat It sails high over third base The crowd stands and cheers His first hit ever He will never make the BIGS Smiles from ear to ear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/30/2010 5:46:00 PM
Barbara, I know this feeling and you have captured it directly. It is flat precision of an announcer on the radio. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:38:00 AM
This form is so elegent when done right and you have done it very well (in my thinking). A few words, stated with precision, creating a vivid and emotional picture.
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:35:00 PM
Great one for this form Barb. You might even have given me some inspiration for something from my coaching days. Thanks. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 5/24/2010 9:55:00 PM
I love this Barbara. Brings back many memories from my childhood through my fatherhood. Thanks for taking me on the journey. Joe
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