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Listen to the shell - ocean-ku

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Listen to the shell - ocean-ku



feet fused to the board 
through the curl the surfer rode ......
listen to the shell



Penned 12 April 2013

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:34:00 AM
    You put this very nicley Seren, really well thought out and described best winning wishes to you Joe..)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/15/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joe....nice of you to stop by...Seren
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Seren, i like your ocean-ku... I've never seen a surfer, but i have a large shell i love putting by my ear.... good luck in the contest... xox~ Linda

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/13/2013 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda is that a conch shell. You hear the sound of the sea?... Thanks again for the comments......Seren
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 5:29:00 PM
    excellent vision..... good luck with this clever ocean=ku

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Suzanne...Seren
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:25:00 PM
    lovely Haiku, Seren, the only problem with not being here often, is i miss these gems....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Harry, lovely to see you, does this one pass muster?....Seren
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 11:27:00 PM
    an amazing post Serene...I love the sea and all about ir.Tnks for stopping by my haiku..You knowing line dancing is grwat..it does look like fun...Have a good day : )

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like the sea as well, couldnt live far away from it..Seren
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:54:00 PM
    This is a phenomenal write, I am most impressed by the way you created this ingenious poem! I loved reading this masterful piece this evening! Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/11/2013 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell thanks for your comments...Seren