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Listen To the Shell - Ocean-Ku

feet fused to the board through the curl the surfer rode ...... listen to the shell Penned 12 April 2013

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/15/2013 9:34:00 AM

You put this very nicley Seren, really well thought out and described best winning wishes to you Joe..)

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/15/2013 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Joe....nice of you to stop by...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2013 9:00:00 PM

Seren, i like your ocean-ku... I've never seen a surfer, but i have a large shell i love putting by my ear.... good luck in the contest... xox~ Linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/13/2013 12:12:00 AM

Thank you Linda is that a conch shell. You hear the sound of the sea?... Thanks again for the comments......Seren

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/12/2013 5:29:00 PM

excellent vision..... good luck with this clever ocean=ku

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/12/2013 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/12/2013 3:25:00 PM

lovely Haiku, Seren, the only problem with not being here often, is i miss these gems....

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/12/2013 5:32:00 PM

Harry, lovely to see you, does this one pass muster?....Seren

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2013 11:27:00 PM

an amazing post Serene...I love the sea and all about ir.Tnks for stopping by my haiku..You knowing line dancing is grwat..it does look like fun...Have a good day : )

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/12/2013 5:33:00 PM

I like the sea as well, couldnt live far away from it..Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/11/2013 5:54:00 PM

This is a phenomenal write, I am most impressed by the way you created this ingenious poem! I loved reading this masterful piece this evening! Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/11/2013 8:33:00 PM

Hi Russell thanks for your comments...Seren