Listen To - Loop Style Poem

(Loop style poem) Listen to the music from my heart Heart of mine is always producing Producing sounds of love and songs Songs of everlasting love and hope Hope that tomorrow is a better day Day filled of sunshine and true love Love that makes me dream again Again of so many beautiful things Things that have no price and tags Tags all invented by all men Men need find meaning of love in heart Heart that can always be pure and true. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 09.17.2014

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J. R. Corbin

Date: 9/18/2014 10:51:00 AM

Hi D. I think I may have seen this styles before, but not nearly as well done as you have written. And I hear your message. So sad us men don't always see the forest for the trees, lol. Thank D. Jim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Jim for stopping by and comment! Yes, sadly this happens thousands of times or more everyday to lots of women all over the World! That's life and this is a fact and reality. Many men are just jerks and controlling freaks! Just losers that don't appreciate anything in the end. Love writing about so many subjects be fantasy or real and in so many forms that I love using.About this form is a lot of fun Jim. Best to you! Cheers! xxxx D.