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Like a Gift from Above

Since I can not have what I am dreaming of, A heavenly substitute I've picked for love. Sweetness on my tongue; into my mouth I shove The angel’s gift of chocolate. Its name is Dove! For Juli- Michelle's contest Rhyme Battle: Round 2

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  1. Date: 12/29/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Love the part about chocolate, it sounds so deliclious so wonderful, but being a women we never turn down sweet treats right nice write above and thank you for making me cheri

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Very witty and funny. Great write Andrea!

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Another "sweet" poem about chocolate from you, Andrea! I know what you mean, though, I cannot resist a piece of chocolate, either! I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. And I really do appreciate the fave! :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Very cute!! ^__^ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:32:00 PM
    lovely write Andrea....thank you for your sweet

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:41:00 PM
    I love chocolate. Don't care what color it is or what brand. You must be a kindred soul. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Hi Andrea been away a while but glad to be back reading your great words, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 8:51:00 AM
    what an awesome poem Andrea. wonderful.(: ) New Santa.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:33:00 AM
    lol This is great! Funny, clever and witty. Great job and I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Andrea! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 PM may have just sent me to my kitchen for a search !!!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Excellent rhyme, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest :) Thanks again for your visits to my page, much appreciated :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 3:41:00 PM
    A perfect little rhyme for a perfect little chocolate. I'm always sneaking a piece of my sister's when I'm at her house. uuummm! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:53:00 AM
    One can gain weight just by looking at this poem! I love chocolate,too. Have you ever been to Hershy, Pa and seen the operation there? It is amazing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 AM
    What if we had not chocolate... - Love it, Andrea. - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:08:00 AM
    This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:05:00 AM
    I admire doves a lot and I ascribe them to women of qualities. Thanks for ur lovely visits to my page my very good friend,I do appreciate. You are a raregem Andrea, Love alwaz Based On Belief.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Yes! I love that Dove chocolate, and it does bring a heart warming feeling a love with it! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:51:00 PM
    mmmmm chocolate think I'll go get some! Thanks for liking my zombie poem! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Very well penned. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:32:00 AM
    sweet beautifully penned piece