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Like a Gift from Above

Since I can not have what I am dreaming of, A heavenly substitute I've picked for love. Sweetness on my tongue; into my mouth I shove The angel’s gift of chocolate. Its name is Dove! For Juli- Michelle's contest Rhyme Battle: Round 2

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  1. Date: 5/11/2014 4:43:00 PM
    Hi Andrea, I was crafty this time and I didn't eat before reading this one. I think I shall have some Maltesers after this read. I can understand the need for chocolate, Isn't just the ladies you know. Things go pair shaped for this guy and he needs his Yorkie, or his galaxy, or his Snickers bar, or...I'm hungry now. I have enjoyed this piece Andrea, short, concise, and fun. Deliciously soft and creamy, just melts In the mind. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Love the part about chocolate, it sounds so deliclious so wonderful, but being a women we never turn down sweet treats right nice write above and thank you for making me cheri

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Very witty and funny. Great write Andrea!

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Another "sweet" poem about chocolate from you, Andrea! I know what you mean, though, I cannot resist a piece of chocolate, either! I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. And I really do appreciate the fave! :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Very cute!! ^__^ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:32:00 PM
    lovely write Andrea....thank you for your sweet

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:41:00 PM
    I love chocolate. Don't care what color it is or what brand. You must be a kindred soul. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Hi Andrea been away a while but glad to be back reading your great words, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 8:51:00 AM
    what an awesome poem Andrea. wonderful.(: ) New Santa.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:33:00 AM
    lol This is great! Funny, clever and witty. Great job and I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Andrea! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 PM may have just sent me to my kitchen for a search !!!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Excellent rhyme, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest :) Thanks again for your visits to my page, much appreciated :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 3:41:00 PM
    A perfect little rhyme for a perfect little chocolate. I'm always sneaking a piece of my sister's when I'm at her house. uuummm! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:53:00 AM
    One can gain weight just by looking at this poem! I love chocolate,too. Have you ever been to Hershy, Pa and seen the operation there? It is amazing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 AM
    What if we had not chocolate... - Love it, Andrea. - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:08:00 AM
    This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:05:00 AM
    I admire doves a lot and I ascribe them to women of qualities. Thanks for ur lovely visits to my page my very good friend,I do appreciate. You are a raregem Andrea, Love alwaz Based On Belief.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Yes! I love that Dove chocolate, and it does bring a heart warming feeling a love with it! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:51:00 PM
    mmmmm chocolate think I'll go get some! Thanks for liking my zombie poem! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Very well penned. Good luck in the contest