Lightning Ink

When it is darkening And the clouds are gathering In the heightening to start raining, All you see is lightning brightening Followed by loud bass hammering frightening Not for threatening but for enlightening, The source of an ink so inspiring Charles melody is a lightning ink. No need for disputing Why wasting time debating? For the lightning is captivating, The ink makes you think The melody is a remedy, Charles melody is a lightning ink. By: Charles Melody, (Lightning ink).

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Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 3/7/2011 2:42:00 AM

Thanks everybody, i give God the glory for i am only a lightning grace.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2011 5:02:00 AM

Sonnet and Rhymw working together in a magnificent manner Charles .. great imagery presents itself to this piece with fascinating flow .. enjoy my friend with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/4/2011 12:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your self portrait? You sound like a bright and powerful personna. There is a saying The pen is mightier than the sword....makes me think of that might.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/4/2011 10:38:00 AM

A nice nick name or pen name that you have chosen for yourself. Keep up the good work. soup mail mom

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/3/2011 8:08:00 PM

lighting the page, yes it does!! stunning work here, charles...:) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 4:40:00 PM

I do love watching the lightning, Charles. I like the nickname you've chosen for yourself. It really describes you to a Tee. Cool poem! Love, "mum"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 10:44:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Charles. Love, Carol