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Lighthouse 1

beam of many lives impaled within gloomy seas... dissolves each sunrise perpetually awaits the ending of day... lone lantern of life © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 7:12:00 PM

The lonely feeling of the lighthouse is beautifully captured here. Your descriptions make it special.

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2011 2:41:00 PM

This is a gem Harry, it captures the importance of the Lighthouse splendidly. Good luck in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 12:19:00 PM

i had to reread the line, harry...yeow, my brain and heart are swimming with delight.."lone lantern of life" sums it all up; wow... winner!..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 11:21:00 AM

Harry your words always mesmerize me luv and fascinate the mind to another level.. lovely visuals combined with eloquent words... good luck in the contest luv.. hope u are well...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:39:00 PM

that last line, line lantern of life, is so striking , Harry. It is the essence of your poem.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/9/2011 6:27:00 PM

love that alliterative last line, great haiku, hope it does well in the contest...thanks for your comment on my monoku :-)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/9/2011 5:12:00 PM

great take on that contest, Harry. Good luck to you and thanks for your encouiraging comment.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2011 2:30:00 PM

Very expressive about lighthouses..Enjoyed reading your thoughts about the topic this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 11:29:00 AM

another expressive piece from your creative pen Harry my friend.. your poetic touch is always so elegant and refined luv.. good luck in the contest..u brought this lighthouse to life.. happy weekend..luv..