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Life Would Be Better Orange.

life would be better orange. like the fruit, the colour. sweet and sour. even when bitter, at least theres a taste. waxy, bubbled exterior. protected. soft, juicy insides. healthy. alive with a purpose. bright, clean, promising. featured in cleaning supplies, aisle 47. the new scent of hygiene. nostalgia, the south where they grow. sunshine, surrounded by green leaves, blue skies. nurtured. harvested. but even oranges have a darkside. rotting, sour. discarded in wooden crates with plastic shreds that offer little comfort. bruised and broken. open for germs to manifest inside. life would be better orange, so long as i were elite.

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