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Reflections of life gently flows Time removes rough edges A sigh; There is continuance from throes Water goes from ledges To fly. Edward J Ebbs - 03/06/2015 Written for a Contest, MEMENTO OF WATERS

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Date: 2/10/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hi Ed, another excellent write from your pen. The waters do flow through your timely pen in a beautiful poetic vision. I enjoyed this peaceful write Ed. It has to be top rating. A seven my friend. May your pen always run gold....Vladislav
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Date: 8/22/2015 12:46:00 PM
Ed, so wonderfully written and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering gems
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Date: 3/28/2015 10:33:00 PM
hey, you did the rhyme I posed!! Congrats, ed. Very nicely won.
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful images in your poem, Ed. I like the way you interpreted that visual. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/28/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank You Sandra :)
Date: 3/27/2015 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, beautifully written.A 7 Blessings and hugs Eve
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/28/2015 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 3/27/2015 6:26:00 AM
A thoughtful quality to your lovely write, Ed. Congratulations! Kim :)
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/27/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 3/26/2015 11:50:00 PM
Lovely, flowing images...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/27/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda:)
Date: 3/26/2015 6:01:00 PM
so delightful Ed lovely congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 3/27/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank You Shadow :)
Date: 3/26/2015 3:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Ed:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/27/2015 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Jan :)
Date: 3/14/2015 5:51:00 AM
Ed, beautifully written verse for the contest, best of luck and thanks for you comment on my poetry today . . .
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/14/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks from Oregon :)
Date: 3/13/2015 9:07:00 AM
shchshsch. That's life water's going down the drain. :) Your journey is much more desirable. :)
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/14/2015 4:17:00 PM
It would be wonderful to fly. I have considered many times to get a glider pilot rating to soar :)
Date: 3/12/2015 10:36:00 PM
I came back here and thought of something. you should say :water goes from ledges. That way you would have an exact rhyme with edges in the stanza above!
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/14/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks...pondering :)
Date: 3/12/2015 10:35:00 PM
I like this one too.
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/14/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Shallot :)
Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM
Nice one. It's great to see all the entries in these kinds of contests.
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/10/2015 10:05:00 PM
Yes, different perspectives are a learning experience...
Date: 3/7/2015 10:11:00 AM
Beautifully penned - Nette has set a tough challenge - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/8/2015 7:46:00 PM
Jan, you are always there with support, Thank You :)

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