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Letting Go-Three Form Style

Part 1 Let there be no memories of you Even the ones that are almost new They remind me false promises and lies Trust is now over with tears in my eyes I give up on you and let myself free Never thought this could happen to me Goodbye didn't come easy it was hard Grief and regret soon shall be barred Only peace my healing heart shall guard Part 2 You left and I waited without clue, Maybe our love wasn't meant to thrive, Nothing stops life and I forgive you, For my heart to breathe and survive. Part 3 I buried the past forgiveness gave a new start life is beautiful. April 5, 2016. Letting Go-Three Form Style - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 4/13/2016 3:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Meenakshi:)
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Date: 4/13/2016 1:27:00 PM
Meenakshi, congrats on your top placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/13/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Laura....it was interesting to write in three forms.
Date: 4/8/2016 2:51:00 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Three wonderful form poems put together as an excellent whole. It is always hard to let go for you walk into an unknown alone. The poem has sadness but at the end it has hope and we do live on our hopes. This has to be a seven my friend and i do wis you well in this contest. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/13/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Mike...just saw your comment.
Date: 4/5/2016 2:04:00 PM
I picket up the flowers of your thought with perfume of good feeling and hope.
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