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Letting Go - For Contest

LETTING GO Lingering claw marks denied my compliance Etching my desire into their defiance Tears that say good-bye to ages passing Tears that hide a Dad’s love everlasting Indifference, feigned stoicisms lie - Nurturing the strength to let them fly God may be the wind beneath their wings God may promise them eternal things Only Dad contains the tears each parting brings
Crayon marks adorn the open door scratch marks from a long discarded toy old Chevy waits – the one we had to store clenched tears announced “her unit must deploy” footie pajamas marching in a distant dust children seeking peace
4/2/2016 submitted to – Letting Go- Three Form Style – Poetry Contest sponsor – Laura Loo

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Date: 4/13/2016 11:19:00 PM
Very touching write John and any father that is a father can relate to this, I surely do, congrats
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2016 6:48:00 PM
Yeah, Brian, so true. It all turned out fine in the end but the road can certainly get rocky at times.
Date: 4/13/2016 9:34:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 4/13/2016 7:42:00 PM
Sons and daughters... always precious, difficult to let go. Such s heartfelt piece. Congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thanks Dineen, appreciate your taking time to read and comment.
Date: 4/13/2016 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thanks BL, for your support
Date: 4/13/2016 5:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Module for stopping by to read and comment
Date: 4/13/2016 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, John:)
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John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Laura for your support
Date: 4/13/2016 1:20:00 PM
John, congrats on your top placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 5:35:00 PM
Laura, this was a very difficult and challenging array of forms combined with a very interesting theme. Thanks for you effort in offering such an ingenious quartet of difficulty.
Date: 4/3/2016 12:57:00 AM
John, your write is very touching and I felt the love in each words, excellent 7 ~
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John Lawless
Date: 4/5/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you BW, appreciate the high mark
Date: 4/2/2016 8:55:00 PM
Well done John, best wishes in the contest...
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John Lawless
Date: 4/5/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Charlie.
Date: 4/2/2016 5:54:00 PM
I have written on a similar theme - we have to let them spread their wings and fly the nest... but it is tough!:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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John Lawless
Date: 4/5/2016 9:24:00 AM
I know Jan, but we race to the bottom of the tree to catch them if their wings falter....

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