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Let the Moon Watch

Trespassing moonlight-- I envy its touch on you and light a candle, let the moon watch from the sky thousand moons' birth in our love © kash poet ===========000============

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 2:22:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:19:00 PM
    This sounds romantic, in a very eastern way. Westerners do not usually think of the moon as birthing love. I really like the difference a few words can make.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
    Breathtaking and beautiful. You have such a romantic soul ! :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:05:00 PM
    moonlight is beautiful, as is your the hint of jealousy within the passion!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:40:00 PM
    a lot of romance here,,,,, very nice,,, blessings of the day to you ;}

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:25:00 PM
    I love the last line on this Kash. Should count how many moons we have seen over the years. Ah shucks to many to count. Love your poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Rich with romance. Wonderful. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 8:16:00 AM
    beautiful thought and a fine Tanka!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:12:00 AM
    kashi, i have watched your moon many times... gotta give me a new moon! looking forward..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:18:00 AM
    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:57:00 PM
    thumbs up, kashi.. missed ya, bud.. so many reunions this weekend... krinnng krinng!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
    Hi Kash, well done. Lovely tanka, Lee

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Hey Kash, This form is so difficult to do well for me anyway--but I think you just nailed it!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:28:00 AM
    what the heck? I'm just finally gonna fave this one!!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 11:18:00 PM
    very nice Tanka friend Kash :) congratulations!! **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your opinion..Sara

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 2:44:00 PM
    well penned tanka kash. thank you for stopping by my poem. well appriciated

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:47:00 AM
    nicely penned ...congrats on your win Kash

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Exquisitely done Kash...second line is a knock-out...congrats on your win - Tim

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!