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Below is the poem entitled LET ME LIVE FREE which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Your company restricts me,
To get around with others in world.
Whenever walks with you,
Assumes there are only me and you.

Forget my pains,
With you only bliss is what I gains.
Even in the darkness,
My every way is enlightened.
The reason was your glowing face.

Today got to know,
You want to remain free.
You believe in living without any bounds and so love,
But trust me,
Instead of getting nervous, I thanked you.
I am not upset for the reason
that we can’t be what I desired.
Though you’ve broken my heart,
But you thought me, “IT’S BETTER TO BE FREE”
Thank you!

My morpho was in my world,
But soul was entirely with you.
Now; let me also live free,
Want to fly in azure sky, like you….

Those streets started calling me,
Where I used to stroll all alone.
Again the emptiness wants to be with me,
With whom I used to stay till yet so long.

You will be always in my heart,
As a friend, but not as its part.
I wanted you in my life,
Now I desire purity of your heart.
Under any circumstances,
I’ll stand by your side.
If you’ll be alone,
I’ll come near to you.
In your bliss,
I’ll laugh with you.

You believed that song was more important for me than you,
How could I tell you?
That song had feeling of you in it…..

More is there to tell you,
But don’t want to make this poem endless.
Rest other remained things,
You can find in my eyes when we’ll meet next.

Request you don’t take my heart away,
Now let me live like you
Without any bindings, restrictions, obstacles
Without love.


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  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:46:00 AM
    You are superb.

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 2/8/2012 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:26:00 AM
    Well done Amit - "It`s better to be free",agree! - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 2/8/2012 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I loves a girl, she didnt avoid me, but she avoids my love. But loving her,atleast I became a poet ....haha! LOLx. Thanks madam for stopping by my poem. With Love,Amit (India)
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:58:00 AM
    amit its nice

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 2/8/2012 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnx Tasleem, with love,Amit.....(India)