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Let Down Left On

My first smile A firerwork in the moon To return and drown in the ocean. As earth was moving I stayed still Searching for corners To lay and to hold. As stars or rain My dreams were falling Upon passengers heads, Making wird noises on their red umbrellas. Every belief gets sacrificed in the name of present, While longing for the glory to attain. I didn't know. As every colour may fade Or fairytales hide disaster, I was left into this storm alone To bear the weight of forgiveness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/13/2015 9:54:00 AM
Wow! Exquisite imagery and verses...
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:40:00 AM
Let Down Left on! Haaaaaaa! Unfortunately life at its worst continues awhile, until we learn to accept its reality, only then can the density be kicked loose to float on down the river of life; out of our lives. Congratulations Valeria, on your worthy 2nt place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Valeria
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Valeria. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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