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Leave Them Rejoicing

Leave Them Rejoicing I would share joy with God, if I had just one day to live. I would spend my time: weeping, praying, writing, rejoicing. Death's separation from loved ones saddens those left behind. I would pray for their strength with my heart for them weeping. Prayers to give hope, guidance, and for mistakes, forgiveness, Introspective contemplations and then, I would write. For each one I love, I would leave poetic wisdom. I would write poems of comfort to help keep goals in sight. And if perchance a contention unresolved remained, I would say do not worry; we would have worked it out. Expressing everlasting love would not be cut short. And my love for them, they would know without a doubt. Because each soul near to me was by Heaven's choosing. I would gather them around, and leave them rejoicing. © July 29, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 8/16/2010 10:41:00 AM
Many congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Audrey's fine contest with this wonderful poetry >> James
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Date: 8/16/2010 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dane
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:10:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized today.. an exceptional write ..enjoy another great victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 1:45:00 PM
Beautifully written, Dane Ann. And it's great to be sharing third place with you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:47:00 AM
Thanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest. And congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Peace, Love, Audrey
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Date: 7/30/2010 9:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dane Ann. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:47:00 PM
A nice self introspection of the self and selfless feelings, Dane
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:12:00 PM
Hey gal....callme now ;) and check soup mail!
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Date: 7/29/2010 8:05:00 AM
A wonderful expression of your inner heart’s feeling in this beautiful Sonnet. Those who care for others are always cared by God in its own way. Love and best wishes......Ravindra K Kapoor
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