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Ann's Rude Awakening

Ann thought her new beau was a keeper, but Bob was a raunchy old peeper. Bare ladies he ogled. Ann’s mind was so boggled, she called the cops: “Come get this creeper!” October 13, 2016

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John Michaels

Date: 4/29/2017 8:21:00 AM

Ha ha! This is brilliant. So glad I found this one as it's cheered me up, no end! Regards, John!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/29/2017 12:13:00 PM

John, I LOVE hearing comments like this--which remind me of why I write limericks! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2016 9:14:00 PM

big congrats on a well deserved win, dear.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2016 9:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/23/2016 9:04:00 PM

Buggers! Love the lim'rik ~ j

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2016 9:12:00 PM

Thanks so much, Lim'rik! Janice

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2016 1:25:00 PM

Very witty, Janice...and indeed a rude awakening!! Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2016 9:10:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paul! Janice

Lu Loo

Date: 10/21/2016 9:04:00 AM

lol! good one Janice! Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/21/2016 9:29:00 AM

Luloo, thanks so much! Janice

Grant Norwood

Date: 10/20/2016 10:33:00 PM

good one Janice, congrats.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/21/2016 9:30:00 AM

Thanks so much, Grant! Janice

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/20/2016 7:36:00 PM

Hi Janice, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2016 9:21:00 PM

Thanks so much, Alexis! Janice

Tim Smith

Date: 10/20/2016 6:59:00 PM

Haha.... great... congratulations

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2016 9:21:00 PM

Tim, thanks so much! Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2016 6:48:00 PM

Really enjoyed this one Janice:-) Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2016 9:22:00 PM

Jan, thank YOU for sponsoring and for placing my poem! Janice

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2016 5:37:00 PM

this is really for laughs, janice.. my comic relief.. sending SOUPIE mail.. huggs

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/15/2016 6:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Nette! I just sent you two Soup mails. Janice

Constance La France

Date: 10/14/2016 8:25:00 PM

Janice..good one for the contest, Best of luck

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2016 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Constance! Janice

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 9:24:00 PM

Hi Janice, I found this to be funny and a bit creepy. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 9:53:00 PM

Creepy, yes--the reason I had Ann (fictional) call the law. Thanks so much for the comment, Alexis! Janice

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/13/2016 7:56:00 PM

lol funny one :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 9:54:00 PM

Casarah, thanks so much! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2016 7:54:00 PM

Your meter is SPOT ON. and a funny one too!!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 9:55:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice