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Latrine Acrostic

(L)eatherneck Jugg Butt was detailed to clean the barracks latrine, (A) humiliatin' prospect for a dedicated United States Marine! (T)he young jarhead wanted so much to gain Captain Grumpy's affection. (R)eduction in rank he could face if he failed the captain's urinal inspection! (I)f he flunked, he could end up in the mess hall scrubbin' pots and pans! (N)o way he wanted to be assigned to trash detail dumpin' garbage cans! (E)ndearment for sergeants, officers and the Corps he hath a paucity of!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 7:51:00 AM
LOL good one Bob! Look how much great poetry military life gave you! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:16:00 PM
good one Bob .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2013 2:24:00 PM
Bob, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! You never fail to entertain...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:28:00 AM
I like your acrostic pretty much Bob H., congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda
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Date: 10/5/2013 12:26:00 AM
Cute one, Robert!! loved the line about urinal inspection. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/22/2013 4:33:00 PM
I'm learning!!!
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:37:00 PM
lol...this was humorous...well crafted acrostic...enjoyed reading it...:)
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:20:00 PM
ha! what an unexpected topic for an acrostic and how wonderfully you've pulled it off!
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Date: 9/21/2013 4:49:00 AM
hahahahah, toilet acrostic, bob
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Date: 9/20/2013 11:00:00 PM
Lol i love it ...Seren
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