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Late Snow

                    rain turned snow
                    late arrival
                    heavenly fall of flakes
                    delays spring
                    asks another time when
                    spring delays
                    flakes of fall heavenly
                    arrival late
                    snow turned rain

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  1. Date: 2/28/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Thank you. I simplify my phrasing to do palindrome like this, and I always keep in mind that each line has to work both forwards and backwards, except for the middle line in the core of the poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 12:59:00 PM
    I like this. I don't think I could of written in this way it seems pretty challenging, but it makes for a very unique poem. Thanks for the read ~Virginia

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 3:04:00 PM
    I meant poetic form.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 3:03:00 PM
    Thanks to both of you for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. The poetic form is called palindrome. It's part of another poetic from called mirror poem.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 1:43:00 PM
    I enjoyed this poem rain turned to and snow turned to rain, Mike. Nature has her own way.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 12:07:00 PM
    Like what you have done with this one..I tried this once or twice..It is not as easy as it looks..Sara