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Last Train To Heaven

The train pulled out of the Clouds singing Harmonies I asked the conductor for Some change He said "son don't you know? Nobody's payin'" I said "sure but the stoplight is Ahead" Thunder and lightnin' Lit the outline of faces I had Known Not one Knew the tune Playin' in my head I'm sure I saw the face of Mother Theresa A smile I thought Just around the Bend About then the ride came To a tumblin' End Next thing I knew choirs were Singin' And butterflies up in My head The fields they went on Forever And sunshine from who Knows where My soul what was left just Started dancin' And prayers once just words Were ......... shooting stars "You see" I said "no one is listenin" That's when I knew The time had come For Me To Fly © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/10/2017 11:21:00 PM
James, your poem was a very, very creative write. It almost seemed like a shape poem. I want to read your poem, Aqualight (an intriguing title).
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/11/2017 2:33:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Thomas!
Date: 7/10/2017 6:44:00 PM
Amazing! Such unique piece loaded with imagery. The subject so new.I loved it.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/10/2017 8:57:00 PM
Thanks Bawa...I remember feeling so free writing this playful poem...one of my favorites
Date: 8/4/2014 10:20:00 PM
Jimbo! Love the spacing of words and its strong effect! This topic of heaven always captivates me especially in the form of a poem...I will be back to read more...God's blessings to you!
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:10:00 AM
This is an inspiring write, James. We all have to catch our final train; hopefully the last stage will be the one that we merit. Take care. // paul
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:56:00 AM
Ahhh!!!That train on a one way to heaven..You painted it so beautifully with your verse,makes me wanna be there.One day I will and I ll search for all the faces here,including yours Jimbo.Strange to think of it ,but heaven is the place I'll be meeting you and my friends here face to face.Through soul We met already so many times: ) : )
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Date: 7/20/2014 2:26:00 PM
very cool poem, my friend. love how it got to the end!
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