Loveliness

Let us leave Our home behind. Venture out in Evening's clement Light, here in Ireland's rugged North western Edge, along the Sea shore where Seagulls soar.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/23/2017 7:39:00 PM

This is a great acrostic, Jean. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Janice. It is one of my favourite poetry forms.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/23/2017 6:17:00 PM

It sounds like a beautiful place. Congratulations on this win Jean. Well deserved. - Dean

Jean Murray
Date: 7/23/2017 6:39:00 PM

Especially my little corner in the north west Dean. Thank you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/24/2016 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Simple and beautiful!

Jean Murray
Date: 2/24/2016 8:27:00 AM

Just like Ireland. Thanks again Susan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/23/2016 1:54:00 AM

You don't need training...some poets are born with the talent. Divine!

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 4:43:00 AM

Connie, those words are music to my ears. My father was a wonderful musician, but also a poet. He only showed me one poem, when I was very young. I can see it still,on crumpled paper.It was composed of puns on country names, about dining.I can only remember he asked the waiter.."Can't Jamacia little speed?"

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/23/2016 12:38:00 AM

Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 4:39:00 AM

Am I getting better DR.?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2016 1:12:00 PM

Jean, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~

Jean Murray
Date: 2/22/2016 1:19:00 PM

Yabbadabbadoo Linda!! Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2016 10:17:00 PM

You have managed to create a most beautiful scene with such few words. A most wonderful acrostic Jean, that reveals how very talented you are! #7

Jean Murray
Date: 2/18/2016 4:17:00 AM

Aw Connie, that is so nice. I don't feel talented at all. Because I have no training in poetry whatsoever, I always feel I am chancing my arm. I rarely change what I first write and most of them take only about ten minutes. But I just love the process. Like knitting a colourful jumper, my arm aches as I race to the end, just to see how it will turn out. Thank you so much.

Lynward Mckee

Date: 2/16/2016 4:52:00 PM

I can see it clearly. The surf and seagulls song. So peaceful and pure.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/16/2016 5:03:00 PM

Such a lovely comment Lynward. You get it!