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Larry Says,

Larry grazes my arm with a tint of hope in his Jack Daniel eyes and says, You're the prettiest thing in this bar. I've searched for closed hearts and hungry hands like his before to fill the empty dens of my heart. And I could fold under the curtains of night, and tuck away my shame for a while. He says, You sure are pretty, but I can make you feel beautiful for at least a night. But instead I say, No thanks, Larry, I already have a closet full of skeletons that I can sleep with tonight.

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Date: 11/13/2015 7:17:00 PM
Go, girl! Witty and pretty package of a poetic soul...you don't need Larry indeed. Keep the words coming! hugs!
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Feli Elizab
Date: 11/16/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Date: 11/13/2015 5:29:00 PM
the wrong approach....will surely be revoked....but under that bottle actions may certainly vary....he failed to add his skeleton, fault by larry....lol....I needed that laugh Felicia thank you....;)
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Feli Elizab
Date: 11/16/2015 2:40:00 PM
You're welcome, Eric! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 11/13/2015 9:06:00 AM
I had immediate visions of a Leisure Suit Larry in a Western bar for some reason.
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Feli Elizab
Date: 11/13/2015 9:08:00 AM
That is pretty accurate lol!
Date: 11/13/2015 7:49:00 AM
Lol! What a wonderful and beautiful piece here my friend. I love how it sounds. Excellent one..........A.M.
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Feli Elizab
Date: 11/13/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Afolabi!!
Date: 11/12/2015 10:31:00 PM
I'm so glad you're getting all of this out, Felicia...keep it going. Your muse is screaming to escape.
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Feli Elizab
Date: 11/13/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thank you again, Lin! This is one of my older ones that I re-worked.

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