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Knocking On Heavens Door Re-Mix

Momma lay my guns to ground Uncle Sam said i can't shoot them anymore There's a dark, dark cloud coming down Oh my God! it's heavens door 9 catfish head on the fence there Why in the hell did i ever fight this war Maybe God will give me Wisdom one day I don't know I prayed for it since i was 4 my brother's on the ground he's dying, bleeding to death I just killed him I'm carrying a sword I look down I'm ashamed now why in the hell did I ever fight this war!

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Date: 5/2/2013 8:26:00 PM
I like the song from Gun's and roses... I love your re-mix too.... love the flow... xox~Linda
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Date: 5/1/2013 10:02:00 PM
Very mixed meaning between the lines here...so loved it...
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Date: 5/1/2013 8:06:00 PM
Well done. Wonderful way to express these difficult circumstances.
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