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Knock--- Acrostic

Keep me open to the sound, to see the sun and feel the breeze Not afraid to feel the cold, willing,... growing, ... never closed to sounds of rain Open my ears to raindrops falling..., someone, please, may be in pain Call them in, to offer shelter, or is that knocking from my knees? Knock my socks off now and then, a hard knock school is not in vain _________________________________________ For Andrea's Contest: "5 line acrostic"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/1/2013 5:16:00 PM
Carrie, love the twist you make midway in this, very well written acrostic!
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:07:00 PM
Hi Carrie,, congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 4:08:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:08:00 AM
A very creative write. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/15/2013 1:27:00 PM
Wow! Carrie. This one really swept me away. Its no wonder that you won.
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Date: 9/15/2013 8:54:00 AM
A fav movie of mine in the scary venue Is The Tommy Knockers!' Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:48:00 AM
Very nice one, Carrie. I especially liked those first three lines,spiritual type message. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/8/2013 10:08:00 PM
This is a truthful and superior write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, full of wonderment Carrie! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/8/2013 7:41:00 PM
Very, very slick message here. I understand this all to well. Great job!
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