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Knickers - For Contest

The clothing she wears is obscene, And knackered her washing machine, She washes by hand, But please understand, Her knickers are never too clean... for Jan's Limerick contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/16/2015 3:19:00 PM

LOL you want to stay far away from that woman. Light & Love

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/4/2015 12:24:00 PM

read like a winner to me, which it looks as though it was. Congrats my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 5/11/2015 7:43:00 AM

Jack, funny limerick, you do these so well, 7, congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, A Perfect Day. . .

Donna Jones

Date: 5/7/2015 10:53:00 AM

:-) :-) ..thanks for the smile today...

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:39:00 PM

Lol, grats on your fun winning write

Judy Konos

Date: 4/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:20:00 PM

hahaha. Love seeing this one again high on the list where it belongs. Congrats, my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win.

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:23:00 PM

JACK, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 4:56:00 PM

Jack, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 3:58:00 PM

This made me giggle Jack - congrats on your 2nd place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/29/2015 1:40:00 PM

A smile that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page in a bouncy limerick style. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2015 6:42:00 PM

VERY good, my friend. I am not sure about her rules, but perhaps you are not to put the name of the limerick as the title only the words For contest. double check it, jack. i would not want this one to lose for that rule.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/26/2015 5:34:00 PM

very funny Jack gl in contest hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/26/2015 5:20:00 PM

grreeat gag, jack... your with comes alive.. huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2015 7:25:00 AM

Cute one..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Your visits to my page a delight..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 4/25/2015 11:40:00 PM

Jack this is a fun one, you do limerick well, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Quick Exit

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/25/2015 7:12:00 PM

hi jack. agreat limerick. istill have my arm in a sling so am not able to wrte or enter. iam writing this with my left hand only. wanted you to know that I received your nice card and to thank you. it doesn't take long to be forgotten. thank you so much. love joyce.