Kitty Charms

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Written, January 9, 2017

Form: Ellip is a form of poetry with nine syllables divided into three lines

or words; rhymed or unrhymed with unlimited stanzas.

Kitty charms sweetest gift in your arms Fluffy fur twinkling eyes mews and purr Hide and seek 'neath the couch gold eyes peak Chases wand bats the toy quick respond Paws squirm neath the closed door priceless feat Climbs the drapes scolded down runs escapes Under chair hides and sulks with blank stare Hears some noise food in bowl smells the joys With meow runs to eat happy now Nighttime treat sleeps on bed warms your feet

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... Gigno

Date: 1/30/2017 10:27:00 PM

!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/9/2017 6:10:00 PM

What a charming poem ...I've never seen this form before Sandra and its very beautifully written:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/9/2017 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your nice comments and best wishes for the contest. It is a fun form to work out. Here are some others posted on Poetry Soup: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems/ellip Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2017 3:18:00 PM

very cute, i enjoyed your use of this Ellip form!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/9/2017 6:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra