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Kiss the Rain

Gray clouds spill open, falling down-pours ensue Cleansing air and filling lakes with sweet purity; Maintaining land and life’s ultimate maturity; Compelling a radiant sun to shine through, Giving very grateful eyes a pleasant view. After shrouding dome has lifted obscurity; For now, all life has acquired security. Earth rejoices in heaven’s generous dew. Embrace descending drops on a wearied soul. Smell the clean scent that refreshes stale air, The splash that penetrates the mind’s domain; Renewing inter being with lost control. Not a thing in this world can ever compare, When one takes time to stop and kiss the rain. Copyright © 2013 By Caryl S. Muzzey Sixth Place Winner ~ "Kiss The Rain" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle March 18, 2013

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Date: 3/14/2013 9:46:00 AM
Good poem for a rainy day. Enjoyed reading. I really like where the sun comes through.
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Date: 2/27/2013 10:16:00 PM
Caryl, congratulations in Gail's "Kiss The Rain" contest. always~ PD
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Date: 2/27/2013 9:03:00 PM
Very nice, congrats!
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Date: 2/25/2013 4:56:00 PM
Very beautiful..good luck....:-)
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 PM
You have refreshed and renewed this thirsty old dried up soul, Caryl...thanks - Tim
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