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Kiss the Rain

Time off from the chaotic rhythm of the office
Exhausted from a long day’s work
Never mind, for tomorrow is a chance to peep
In the blue haze of early morning

Another day, another chance
Of a wishful thinking of the seventh heaven
That a Godsend may soon fall to earth in drops
To break the silence of the morning

I need the rain to accompany me
And lull me into a deep therapeutic easiness
Unbosoming the thoughts of turning back time
Between playful stomping and dancing on water puddles

The cloud drifted on to reveal a blinding cloudburst
The first sign of a light drizzle gave hope
Therefore, I looked upward to the gossamer layers of clouds
As railing rains trickle down my face
I opened my parched lips and closed my eyes to kiss the rain

23 February 2013

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:59:00 AM
    Noel, I was reading this one again. it's so nice! I am thinking that one word you use is probably puddles. when you say water piles. Do you know puddles? I am sure that is what you mean!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:30:00 AM
    I expect to see this in the winners list! An outstanding write, very well done! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:23:00 PM
    Noel I really felt your deep joy for the rain in the last stanza of this one. beautiful how you describe kissing the rain!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:00:00 PM
    Hello Noel, a fondness against the aqua waters, I love the way you poem escorted me into the calmness healing surrender of a sweet kiss towards the rain... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Noel very good, I like it, good luck...David

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:05:00 AM
    Noel, this is the lovely poem - very well written! - I would think that it is a winning poem - good luck in the contest. - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)