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Keep it polite, please......(my WORST poem ever!!!!)

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Keep it polite, please......(my WORST poem ever!!!!)

Four Ugly Colored Kittens 
Often Fight Fatigue

Sugar Honey Iced Tea
Helps Everything Any Day

Darn Umpire Misjudged Ball
Can't Understand Normal Thinking

Gary Only Dreamed Darla Answered Mail Now
As She Started Having Other Liaisons Earnestly

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:23:00 PM
    Lovely poem...it warmed my heart

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 3:55:00 PM
    congrats mister~I like

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 6:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Jim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 4:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this fine contest...SK

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 2:32:00 PM
    Most discombobulating one for sure!! hahaha, Congratulations, Jim.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, Jim

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 12:04:00 PM
    Congrats Jim on your big win in P.D.'s worst poem ever contest.. enjoy a sweet victory today as well as a Happy Thanksgiving luv..

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 10:48:00 AM
    Jim...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 9:14:00 AM
    JIM, Congratulations, Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 9:00:00 AM
    Jim, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:25:00 PM
    I am not sure of the meaning... sounds wacky!

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 1:28:00 PM
    Haha! Wow! I looked down the left hand side to see wot exactly was the root word(s) of your acrostic....but then read the acrostic root from left to right instead! Haha! Uhhhhmmmm, I wish that I had thought of this~Chris