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Just Say: "My Love, Come To Me!"

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Just Say: "My Love, Come To Me!"

What a delight to hear from you!
You say you could meet me if there were
No impediments to stop me from going through
Arduous hurdles of journey I am unaware

My love, I need you and I’m dying for you
You talk of exceptional hurdles of the way
If you care for me and your love is true
Lightning of my desire will carry me in a sway

No barriers and no obstacles to stop me
Formidable mountains will melt like ice
My thirst for you will drink fathomless sea
Cyclones will perish as my heart cries

The frontiers that nations have built
Shall be demolished by my earnest sigh
Deserts will shrink with a feeling of guilt
Jungles and bushes will make way if I try

Just tell me, my love, come to me
I’ll tread the valleys, roads and lanes
And easily swim across the tumultuous sea
My passion riding chariot of hurricanes

Copyright © Mohammad Yamin

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:08:00 AM
    This is a cool poem ;) keep writing! Good things will come your way :D E>Evalina<3

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 2:28:00 AM
    'My passion riding chariot of hurricanes'... yes, passionate, desires unstoppable, breaking free, a love story. awesome words flowing from your heart to poetry, sir.

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    Date: 1/21/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your admiration, Mia. This is a story of someone deserted by his love. Shows how strong is his passion and desire. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 9/27/2008 7:45:00 PM
    The love and passion is simply overwhelming in this incredible piece! Wondefully written. Trudy

  1. Date: 9/13/2008 6:47:00 AM
    Yes you have the passion thing down to a science. your expressions are masterfull. but i'm just way past the age of begging. but i enjoyed it. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 9/11/2008 9:01:00 PM
    my passion riding chariots of hurricanes........... WOW!

  1. Date: 9/7/2008 10:12:00 PM
    That was good, and the end was even better, you are very good with using words. great poem

  1. Date: 9/6/2008 8:56:00 PM
    This is just an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. Your use of figurative language is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 10:37:00 PM
    I wont leave you a comment saying how great your poem is ( but it is) and tell you to read my poem. But your poem did remind me of a love that Ive lost and dont wont to find :). Good read!

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 4:11:00 PM
    Wow! I hope that one day someone feels this strongly about me, you have a way of pulling the reader in, and making one forget this is sheer poetry, you might enjoy reading my write, the men of poetry soup, I love the passion, and how there is nothing that will stand in the way of your love that is true devotion, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 1:06:00 PM
    Well wow is right! Such passion and devotion so amazingly written! Each paragraph is a tribute to the power of love that burns deep inside you. Someone is so very lucky! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 12:01:00 PM
    Wow, that last line is killer. What an amazing visual, and feel of love! Many blessings, Kristin

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 10:17:00 AM
    wow what a powerful write. I like it a lot! exceptional write of yours.. nice read.