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Just Ducky, Why

JUST DUCKY, WHY? “Oh, look, my little Johnny’s the only one in step.” It had always seemed that way, somehow, no matter how hard he tried little Johnny just couldn’t seem to get it straight. He colored outside the lines just because he thought the hippo should be a little bigger, rounder, you know, like a hippo. He was told by the music teacher “he couldn’t carry a tune in a bucket”. Little Johnny didn’t care too much for choir but he sure liked to sing those alleluia’s - loudly. He was, or at least was told he was – too slow for the track team too short for the basketball team too soft spoken for the debate team. That he was, always would be, “a duck out of water”. “Well, the duck seems pretty happy in the water” “and always goes back in when he wants to be happy.” “I wonder what, or where, my water is?” Over time little Johnny accepted his fate, celebrated being the only one in step with himself, colored outside the lines, sang off key and loudly, understood that he danced to a different tune. Not much has changed for “little” Johnny. Oh, he got bigger, accepted his “duck-ness”, still can’t carry a tune in a bucket, is still too slow, too short, too soft spoken. Yet he knows that he is just fast enough, just tall enough, just loud enough, and just musical enough for himself and he wouldn’t have him any other way. John G. Lawless 2/20/2015 Submitted – Out of Water – Poetry Contest sponsor – Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 4/5/2015 12:03:00 AM
John, a nice poem telling us to stick our neck out, even if out of water. Congrats on the fine win. Mohan
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:20:00 PM
Back again to congratulate on your wonderful win. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
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Date: 4/4/2015 5:17:00 PM
I love how you took the phrase "out of water" and put this twist into your poem. Bless those who step out of water, to be proud of who they are meant to be! :) Congratulations John !!
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:20:00 PM
John, a huge congratulations to your on your First Place win! Your poem presents such a unique approach to the theme, and I really enjoyed it very much! Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:23:00 PM
John, thanks for making me smile, good fun use of the theme. ! Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273
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John Lawless
Date: 4/4/2015 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Sheri for taking the time to administer the contest. Glad you enjoyed my entry
Date: 2/20/2015 10:26:00 PM
A wonderful verse, good luck in the contest a 7. Blessings Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/21/2015 9:19:00 AM
you must be a military or retired military man, as my husband is
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I have often been "a duck out of water" as I didn't always work and play well with others.

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