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Jerusalem, Jerusalem

ballad I was a child creating kidstuff, I lied and cheated just enough to feel the guilt when all alone at home. I copied homework from friend Sue and passed it down the row to Lou. We knew so little of Jerusalem. When in the end, I turned a teen I tried the drug and boozing scene. With just a few bad trips, it all hit home. I spent a long weekend in jail I thought I’d died and gone to hell. No peace in that place, no Jerusalem. So glad was I when they said to me let’s go to church as family. It was belief that brought us to Shalom. We’d fought like cats and dogs for aye There had to be a better way. True contentment began at Jerusalem. Of course, there is a God above! I know Him as the God of love. He made the rules and guides us on to home. He wrote the law, then paid the price Son, Jesus came as sacrifice so we could tunnel through to Jerusalem. 'Twas there I learned to place me last to put God first; now when they ask, “How come on Sundays you never stay at home?” I am one who found that lost chord no longer scared to serve my Lord - I’ve found the peace that comes in Jerusalem. I did not take Christ’s name in vain I am a Christian with much to gain and thus I greet you with a hearty Shalom. I cannot keep Christ to myself I cannot put Him on the shelf for He is the Way to blest Jerusalem. Jerusalem means place of peace; Jerusalem needs no police. we’ll see that when God comes to take us home. Salvation means that we have learned forgiveness never will be earned. It's the light we find in Jerusalem. written January 17, 2013

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Date: 5/21/2018 8:43:00 PM
Shalom, shalom. This is a very inspiring, well thought out, peaceful piece. Thank you, Jesus for bringing Jerusalem back to life and giving us peace!
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Date: 5/24/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Juliet, your comment is encouragement to keep on writing. Yes, and I thank my Lord for the peace He brings in the midst of chaos.
Date: 5/21/2018 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. Jerusalem, so pertinent today and always. I am not a religious but a spiritual man, but/and this poem speaks deeply to me. Many kind wishes to you and Peace for all, Kai
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Date: 5/24/2018 8:45:00 AM
I thank you, Kai, for the placement and more so for your comment. Shalom
Date: 5/20/2018 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tunnel vision poem.
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:13:00 PM
WONDERFUL, reverent, winning poem, Reason! Janice
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Date: 5/20/2018 7:44:00 PM
Appreciate the comment, Janice, on my spiritual piece.
Date: 5/20/2018 7:02:00 AM
Wow. Powerful and so well-crafted. Congrats on your most deserving win, Reason.
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Date: 5/20/2018 7:51:00 PM
I am happy to read your reply; thanks for the kind remarks. Not the story of my own life; but of someone I knew well. Faith heals and makes of us what we can never be on our own.

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