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Jekyll and Hyde - Doppelganger

bright eyes gleaming with mischief gentle compassionate views determinedly ambitious me sober and free glazed eyes full of hate and fear anger mixed with self pity high drama - no coping skills alcoholic me Written 12/6/2015 Dodoitsu Doppelganger Contest by Alfred Vassallo 4th Place

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Date: 3/23/2018 10:36:00 PM
Great contrast, nice write.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/24/2018 5:19:00 PM
Thank you David!
Date: 12/9/2015 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Susan. Knew two people who were alcoholics. Unlike you, they never overcame that habit which was to their own detriment! Great write, a 7.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/16/2015 2:22:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. I didn't and don't do iit alone... am very blessed. Very kind words and thanks for the 7.
Date: 12/9/2015 2:44:00 AM
Susa, I like the way you describe changes of mood that happens when a person gets into "alcoholism"... congrats!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/9/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2015 1:41:00 AM
An exceptional write Susan!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/9/2015 11:56:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/8/2015 5:38:00 PM
Congrats very nicely said, sad reality, but some continue to cope that way.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/8/2015 11:53:00 PM
Certainly is. Thank you, John!
Date: 12/8/2015 6:09:00 AM
Truly expressed words Susan.... Congrats on big win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/8/2015 11:49:00 PM
Thanks#
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/8/2015 11:44:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/7/2015 5:01:00 PM
Sad ...Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 7:11:00 PM
Yes it is sad. That other me 20 yrs ago is lots of women today still suffering. Miracles happen!
Date: 12/7/2015 12:55:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/7/2015 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Susan, a7!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Very kind.
Date: 12/7/2015 10:20:00 AM
Excellent write, Susan! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Date: 12/7/2015 8:10:00 AM
You nailed this one. Congratulations.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 6:50:00 PM
You did! :) Thank you.
Date: 12/7/2015 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 6:48:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/6/2015 7:44:00 PM
Yes, a split personality and not so unheard of when it is about alcoholism. GREAT take on this theme.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/6/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Appreciate you.

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