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It's January

J ubilee’s song heightens; the bell is rung A uld Lang Syne…fond memories we all keep, N ever-ending the pour of chilled wine, that U nsaid words of love spill on tinseled lights; A s orchestral tunes greet this first of month R eveling in dreams laced with snowdrop scent; Y ounger the hearts...chanting newborn wishes! Enter the BEST SHORT ACROSTIC POEMS Andrea Dietrich's Contest ~ This is my birth month; carnation and Snowdrop are symbolic flowers implying hope and beauty 12/ 22/ 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2015 1:37:00 PM

Another January will soon be upon us, and they're coming round faster and faster. Nice Acrostic Nette, James :) :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/14/2015 3:30:00 PM

January is the fresh start....to all those who think they are smart....I will never drink or smoke again....that's the lie so many begin....lol....great poem....;)

Kash Poet

Date: 8/13/2015 11:20:00 AM

Love this Nette!Beautiful Acrostic.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/12/2015 8:16:00 PM

This is stunning, Nette!!! "Unsaid words of love spill on tinseled lights;" I love that line....it seems you thought deeply for this one. Always a pleasure reading your work...~Laura

James Peranteau

Date: 8/12/2015 12:41:00 PM

Awesome Acrostic dear poet ! Thank you for inspiring my next write Nette ! Have a wonderful "Summer"....much love, james

Paul Callus

Date: 8/12/2015 11:15:00 AM

Love your take on this month topic, Nette. A special mention goes to the perfect expressive flow of words from beginning to end...graceful! #7 ~ hugs // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 8/12/2015 4:02:00 AM

This is so wonderful my very dear friend, Nette! I like it so much. I can never forget your very special day! It was already engraved in my mind and heart. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank you so much as well for being the first one to comment on my latest posted poem. Pls, go and read more replies of mine on my page, if you've time. Talk to you soon my very dear friend. Have a Great Day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/11/2015 8:18:00 PM

A powerful well constructed piece, I love it.....excellence........A.M.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/11/2015 5:27:00 PM

enchanting poem Nette gl in contest hugs 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2015 3:41:00 PM

this was really sweet, chanting newborn wishes! I love the festive feeling to this one and How well you evoked the tone of the season!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2015 3:35:00 PM

Wonderfully done, Loved the line -reveling in dreams laced with snowdrop scent- :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/11/2015 12:53:00 PM

Well done. I enjoyed this (7) -JT

Manny Paras

Date: 8/11/2015 8:59:00 AM

Enchanting poetry!It has a very nice musical tone with a theme that could be a part a gleeful way to welcome this "first month!"

Lyva Marty

Date: 8/11/2015 4:29:00 AM

Cheery anticipation of a new year designed with jubilant mood. I also like your appreciation for the past; not living in it but remembering it fondly. Such sweet melody of January! Thank you for your comments!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2015 4:07:00 AM

Lovely write Nette - it wasn't until I read Eve's poem that I discovered Carnations are our birth flower ... and they are my favourite cut flower:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/11/2015 3:18:00 AM

Cheerful elegance in each line, Nette. Best wishes in the contest! huggs

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/11/2015 3:10:00 AM

Hi Nette, how are you. Like your' unsaid words of love' here is my unsaid words of appreciation.. GL.